1. To me I think my literacy Narrative was really well done, in my own sense of writing.
2. My conclusion did what I intended it to do, To wrap things up and be done with the paper, and i think i did that well.
3. I Think Could have made major changes, to the point of re-writing the whole paper. And putting it into a diffrent tone. and use transistions like butter.
4. I thought of the topic by thinking of the word "Literacy" and writing on the first thing that popped into my head.
5. I just 'rambo'd' it, by just sitting at the computer and typeing it all out. then going back and making changes, sometimes taking away and adding paragraphs.
6. No other refrences. All from recolection of memory :)
7. Some of the peer editing help, pointed out many grammer errors, and to explain more details in.... detail.
8. The next paper i will write, i will most likely write it in 2 diffrent tones which equals 2 different papers, and pick which one i like
